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Hey, so after recieving a ton of tipps and kind advise from Chris-Karbach and NPAW i had to try doing a landscape painting aswell. I decided on this kind of fantasy style mountain szene 
(hope you don`t mind being linked here, if you do tell me and I`ll shall remove it immediately! I just wanted to try out how to create links :3) Anyways this is my first noteable attempt at painting a landscape, so I`d appreciate any feedback be it good or bad, so I can do better in my next one. Yes there will be more soon, since I had a lot of fun doing this one 
Hope you like it!
(hope you don`t mind being linked here, if you do tell me and I`ll shall remove it immediately! I just wanted to try out how to create links :3) Anyways this is my first noteable attempt at painting a landscape, so I`d appreciate any feedback be it good or bad, so I can do better in my next one. Yes there will be more soon, since I had a lot of fun doing this one Hope you like it!Image size
5000x2813px 13.46 MB
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Dude this really good for a first attempt 
The sky is really nice, the birds and the person in the mountain walking are nice touches and add some atmosphere.
As for feedback for improvement i will suggest 2 main things that stand out to me .....
1. Its very soft overall, you need some hard edges especially in the foreground, soft edges in the background is good as it adds depth but only works if you have nice sharp edges in the foreground.
2. Is to add some epic depth (for this painting especially) the way to do it for this one is just to add hints of more mountains in the background, where you have that area of thick grey clouds you could add a few little mountain peaks coming through, same with the blue area, add some very very light mountains peaking through the clouds, dont add to much detail to them (and also a lot lighter in color/tone the farther away they get) and it will give the sense that this is a huge mountain range of epic scale.
Overall for a first attempt this is great, if you stick to this, keep researching, watching vids and picking up tips and most important keep painting all the time and practice, practice, practice you will be awesome at landscapes very soon i think
The sky is really nice, the birds and the person in the mountain walking are nice touches and add some atmosphere.
As for feedback for improvement i will suggest 2 main things that stand out to me .....
1. Its very soft overall, you need some hard edges especially in the foreground, soft edges in the background is good as it adds depth but only works if you have nice sharp edges in the foreground.
2. Is to add some epic depth (for this painting especially) the way to do it for this one is just to add hints of more mountains in the background, where you have that area of thick grey clouds you could add a few little mountain peaks coming through, same with the blue area, add some very very light mountains peaking through the clouds, dont add to much detail to them (and also a lot lighter in color/tone the farther away they get) and it will give the sense that this is a huge mountain range of epic scale.
Overall for a first attempt this is great, if you stick to this, keep researching, watching vids and picking up tips and most important keep painting all the time and practice, practice, practice you will be awesome at landscapes very soon i think